uma redação que achei

Caríssimas,
estava eu fuçando numas coisas e encontrei essa redação que escrevi uma vez para a Tortura Inglesa. Não sei onde eu tava com a cabeça!!!
Cabe frisar que eu tirei 8,5, então ela não tá lá essas maravilhas....
Divirtam-se ^^

Tucson

Tucson is a tiny town in the middle of Arizona's desert, in United States. This town is known for having a colony of Iakestonians, the oldest in America. The Iakestonians are very hospitable, and tourists surely enjoy their typical dance and their very particular way of making sounds from their hands and their armpits.
Tucson is also known for having the greatest saloon (like the ones in Old West's movies) in Arizona. It's called White River, and there are beautiful waitresses serving aromatic freshly-ground coffee and some typical drinks (some of them with freshly-squeezed orange and lemon juices).
Gettinf there is a bit hard, but it's worth it. To do so, you have to take a plane to Marach's airport and go the rest of the way by camel (which introduces you to the place's atmosphere).
The accomodation is humble, but all the windows of the only hotel of the city overlook the oasis, where the camels drink the water from the shimmering lake. People can swim there, although it's a little bit shallow.
At late night, you can go to White River to watch the can-can show performed by the waitresses... it's wonderful!